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couldnt get three lines
type sentence then hit enter
now i can haiku

Tell me about the car i saw parked outside your door ? Tell me what you left me waiting two or three hours for ? Tell me why when the phone rings, baby, your up and across the floor ? Please dont keep me wondering no more.....

254 (edited by darrflo 2008-04-27 23:06:10)

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it is twelve o'clock
time to get my **** to bed
could do this all night


Sorry,I meant "butt"

Tell me about the car i saw parked outside your door ? Tell me what you left me waiting two or three hours for ? Tell me why when the phone rings, baby, your up and across the floor ? Please dont keep me wondering no more.....

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darrflo wrote:

it is twelve o'clock
time to get my **** to bed
could do this all night


Sorry,I meant "butt"

Midnight's not so bad
My b**t did not meet my bed
Until THREE A.M.

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

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A bit rough today
More pain today than I like
did somebody wrong?

Have no time for tears
Wasted water's all that is
time to work it out

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

257 (edited by gsj 2008-04-29 16:21:16)

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dig deep my old friend
bones creak and crack at our age
pain is ours daily

comes with where we are
better than alternative
let the sun still shine

I'm pleased to wake up
even when the rain falls hard
I fight my body

could be worse though Jeff
long hair?, short hair?, tuck or not??
we could become Roy

wink

(posted with due respect and affection for the aforementioned 'tucker' big_smile)

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young

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Thats why we got blues
Because we get blue sometimes
Good man feelin bad

Done somebody wrong
The Karma circle will turn
Do somebody right

Rock On and Keep the Faith

Jack Loves Patty Loves Joe

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My Karma is good
but my bones still creak and ache
better things await

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young

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sissified this morn
a legend in my own mind
once again.  Like V!

dug deep and prayed well
I can channel the life force
what flows through will heal.

I have to present
to the jackals in the morn
I'm the king of Beasts.  cool

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

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Funny thing these aches
When the universe diverts
It's like they are gone

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

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Life is pain for me
My brain,feet,back,shoulders,knees
Better days are ahead

Rock On and Keep the Faith

Jack Loves Patty Loves Joe

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Days go by sometimes
With not a sign of haiku
Then madness returns

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

264

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better days indeed
I've got seven gigs in May
keep the tubes glowing
smile

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young

265

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We all have bad times
It's life, unfortunately!
But it never lasts...

Better times ahead
As sure as the sky is blue
Bridge to Better Days...

Susan smile

"Listen to the melody cause my love is in there hiding"

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Bridge To Better Days
maybe for the days we live
what will be will be

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young

267

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Don´t you guys know that
Better days are coming now
Springtime and Joe-tour! smile

Eva

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Well said young lady
and I for one am having
a much better day

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

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Good to hear that Jeff,
Gonna see Bryan Lee play
So good day today.

Hope to get some videos
And show them to my dearest
Bonabuddies soon.

Eva smile

270 (edited by darrflo 2008-04-30 13:04:27)

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saw tina marie
done by bryan and kenney
on my ten days out

played that flying v
like there was no tomorrow
glad he's still around

alot of others
on there have since passed away
see them while you can

well have a great time
anticipating review
from you dear eva

just like bryan said
strive to be your very best
might be your last day

i must now log off
gotta get ready to golf
hope i win money

Tell me about the car i saw parked outside your door ? Tell me what you left me waiting two or three hours for ? Tell me why when the phone rings, baby, your up and across the floor ? Please dont keep me wondering no more.....