Topic: Haiku! whats the rules?

Cry, grumble and moan
I get older every day
Snap, crackle and pop

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

You got it! The standard form is 5 - 7 - 5


Chandler, Gibson, Strat
hand moves faster than lightening
the slide screams the blues


~Rhonda

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

One of my favorites:

Worker bees can leave
Even drones can fly away
The queen is their slave

Well, the night I was born
Lord I swear the moon turned a fire red

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Joe Bonamassa
plays the blues like no one else
he's a guitar god

--Vik cool

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Sorry, this thread is lost on me - can anyone help?

Geoff

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Here you go Geoff......

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

P. S.  I'm so glad Sue joined us officially!!!!

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I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Pass him on the right
He is clogging up the left
Drunken redneck fool

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
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Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

I'll leave you with it then

Geoff

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Bonabuddy Stu
the wisest words come from you
gift is this haiku
wink

10 (edited by bigjeffjones 2008-03-06 09:14:35)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Why don't you tell your
dreams to me? Fantasy will
set you free.  Don't stop.

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Not always this good     
Love and music rock the boat
Time is on my side

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

bigjeffjones wrote:

Why don't you tell your
dreams to me? Fantasy will
set you free.  Don't stop.

Steppenwolf is great
also a novel by Hess
got their name from him

Well, the night I was born
Lord I swear the moon turned a fire red

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Jane H. wrote:

Bonabuddy Stu
the wisest words come from you
gift is this haiku
wink

Wisest I am not
I simply share what I feel
You embarrass me tongue

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

This haiku-ing stuff
Not really a piece of cake
No, webcor, webcor

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Geoff wrote:

Sorry, this thread is lost on me - can anyone help?

Geoff

Sorry we can’t help
Is it because you don’t like
guitars and poems?

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Amsterhammer wrote:

This haiku-ing stuff
Not really a piece of cake
No, webcor, webcor

Blinding turn of phrase
Some say for the Yank he is
Please go to work now

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

bigjeffjones wrote:
Amsterhammer wrote:

This haiku-ing stuff
Not really a piece of cake
No, webcor, webcor

Blinding turn of phrase
Some say for the Yank he is
Please go to work now

A master's presence
Humbling for the Yank it is
Quietly he goes

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

18 (edited by gsj 2008-03-06 16:06:00)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

A masters presence
It is the guitar's master
The presence of Joe

Amsterhammer wrote:
bigjeffjones wrote:
Amsterhammer wrote:

This haiku-ing stuff
Not really a piece of cake
No, webcor, webcor

Blinding turn of phrase
Some say for the Yank he is
Please go to work now

A master's presence
Humbling for the Yank it is
Quietly he goes

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young