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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

BluesMan wrote:

Haiku Master Jeff
Haiku this and Haiku that
I'm sick of Haiku

Roy

P.S. Just an editorial opinion from one who is a Haiku novice and non-believer. Sorry, I'll just crawl back into my hole and cover myself up again.

Come on old pal Roy
you can do it if you try
you are creative

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I took a picture
In Berlin for my friend George
Who likes German wurst

http://www.flickr.com/photos/25162871@N … 320638189/

Only picture for
today, little Eva is
so sleepy tonight

Got to get some rest
from Bonamania now
More pics tomorrow!

Good night,  Eva

Edited to add the right link to the photo ...

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eva wrote:

I took a picture
In Berlin for my friend George
Who likes German wurst

Ein Haiku auf Deutsch
Ist wirklich etwas anders
Berlin ist mir Wurst

Thank you dear Eva
Elder's sausage fantasies
Finally fulfilled

RIP Iron Man

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

what does this mean George?
do you prefer old sausage?
with mustard or sauce?

Amsterhammer wrote:
eva wrote:

I took a picture
In Berlin for my friend George
Who likes German wurst

Ein Haiku auf Deutsch
Ist wirklich etwas anders
Berlin ist mir Wurst

Thank you dear Eva
Elder's sausage fantasies
Finally fulfilled

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

and with the two words
old sausage the haiku thread
now grinds to a halt



tongue

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

186 Reply by gsj (edited by gsj 2008-04-01 16:24:58)

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I knew a Heidi
said her surname was Sausage
sweet Heidi Sausage

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never grow old, never ever die young
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Tomorrow I fly
out to Nashville, Tennessee
and seek my fortune

not country music
Waylon and Johnny are gone
feel the salsa burn

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188 Reply by gsj (edited by gsj 2008-04-01 16:52:24)

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salsa & western
the big new taste in Nashville
gives bite to your twang!

good luck blues brother
I wish you every success
don't Haiku sales pitch smile

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congratulations
on your three thousand postings
wow jane, that's a lot!



smile  smile  smile  Libby  smile  smile  smile

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Big Jeff, blues brother
how was your trip to Nasville?
Haiku salsa news....

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Am still in Nashville
banging head against the wall
feels so good can't quit

meet again today
making good connections now
fly home tomorrow

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Etz is amol Zeit
für a bairisches haigu,
muss aa amol sei.

Kanner vaschdad mi,
and you guys must think by now
I ate too much wurst.

Eva lol

George - any ambitions to translate?! wink

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

eva wrote:

Etz is amol Zeit
für a bairisches haigu,
muss aa amol sei.

Kanner vaschdad mi,
and you guys must think by now
I ate too much wurst.

Eva lol

George - any ambitions to translate?! wink

big_smile

I'd love to Eva, but I can't make it into a proper haiku -

It's about time
For a Bavarian haiku
It had to happen sometime


Roy -

A captain to do?
You know there's but one answer
Get with the haiku

RIP Iron Man

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Captain needs training
send him on the haiku course
less gobbledegook

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Country music here
is giving me a headache
met with Gene Simmons

Now looking for blues
and maybe some barbecue
downtown nashville bust

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Lucky for everyone
Monty missed the gun topic
He likes his boomsticks

Well, the night I was born
Lord I swear the moon turned a fire red

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pass me the Knob Creek
and let me kill this flu bug
off to bed to sleep

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Formedicinal
effecttosleepperchanceto
dreamtropicsofcourse

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