Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

my friend jungle jim
is dying of lung cancer
one cig too many

I don't have the time
(for every soul I love)
to make a showing

But I meditate
and gratitude comes to me
love will conquer fear

look in the mirror
do you see what the world sees
mine own self be true

remains of the day
thankful for it I will be
chin up ol' man; NOW!

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Now Moore is no more
no tornado's a mile wide
a finger from hell

I lived through Andrew
no roof on second story
bedroom with a view

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             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

I say there young man
do you want to walk in mine?
I was cocky once

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             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

760 (edited by bigjeffjones 2013-07-22 16:59:32)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Bluse Jam next Sunday
more white boys who just don't know?
not like Bob...or Joe.

hope I get a chance
to prove how humble I'm is
no I don't fit in

one thing I should know
he said to me, scary like
no maybe I don't

lol

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             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Can you count to four?
make them shake their T & A?
Funky doc of love

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Bragging on my son
His phrasing is excellent
one more for the list

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

just like Brer Rabbit
surviving the briar patch
wearing sunglasses

super quick Jane Dear
but I limp, I do not hop
good comparison

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             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Miami Dolphins
some bad officiating
Brady the MACHINE.

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

The Divine One asks
Are you a wild animal?
You're pacing again...

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

766 (edited by Rocket 2013-11-06 21:24:10)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Pace ON as pace Does
All of creatures must do take to
Peace Pace ON, Pacer

"He still doesn't charge for mistakes! wink"
http://jbonamassa.com/tour-dates/
"Everybody wants ta get inta the act!"
“Now, this isn’t your ordinary party crowd, here.  I mean, there are professionals in here.”

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Verygoodrocket
somewhatphilosophical
one step, then the next

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             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

never will I host
Thanksgiving again? Not me
Spent next day in bed.

yes the world is round
the circle of life sacred
feel like sweating blood

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Stranger than fiction
How can they be gone so young?
I hope they're free now.

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

I don't know bout sleep
the volume is stuck on ten
the thermostat failed

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             It is
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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

I looked at post count
I've been lurking way too long
but that don't scare me

blood pressure way high
another seizure awaits
new meds. and now? GOOD

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Jane H. wrote:

Bonadepression
no shows no cruise no tickets
medicate loudly

Fantastic!

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Goodbye Betty Jean
I really loved you full time
So glad I knew you

"He still doesn't charge for mistakes! wink"
http://jbonamassa.com/tour-dates/
"Everybody wants ta get inta the act!"
“Now, this isn’t your ordinary party crowd, here.  I mean, there are professionals in here.”

774

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

The winter drags on
Banks towering overhead
We await the warmth

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