Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Hypocracy rules
Even hate it in myself
where's the love in that?

Insurance a scam
one more increase due to fraud
what a crock of bull

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Our Florida fave
Is taking us all to school.
Do you haiku, too?

Terrance Shuman
Kansas City, MO

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

there's been a killing
Alcohol came in to play
over on main street

just turned twenty one
met up with the end of nights
wrong end of a gun

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724

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

bigjeffjones wrote:

there's been a killing
Alcohol came in to play
over on main street

just turned twenty one
met up with the end of nights
wrong end of a gun

Sad commentary
Happens here every day
City gangs at play

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725 (edited by Rockfarmer 2012-06-06 14:49:11)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

RickB wrote:
bigjeffjones wrote:

there's been a killing
Alcohol came in to play
over on main street

just turned twenty one
met up with the end of nights
wrong end of a gun

Sad commentary
Happens here every day
City gangs at play

Sounds like a blues song
JB should write for record
very dark and deep

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

song already mine
written last summer July
the funky blues doc

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Listen Funky D
Looking for a FB chat
Dr Jones ain't there

RIP Iron Man

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

bandages are off
and after 48 hours
it sure is funky  tongue

a cosmic shower
hot water and a soap bar
shampoo and a shave

I am so ready
anti-bacterial suds
thought that was the dog lol

If I offend, please
forgive an old man in pain
just a bit of sport

am happy because
the surgery looks well done
and I was afraid

thanks for best wishes
shout out to the whole forum
shout out to the band

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

I can't write haiku
I totally suck at it
Get well soon Doc Love

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Jack Loves Patty Loves Joe

730

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Great you feel Good again BJJ !!! ... .you are One of The Bravest Man in The World !!!
Im sure ....greetings from over The Pond smile

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

found a summons here
when I came home from the wake
I felt bad before lol

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

sell the furniture
billiards in the living room
music down the hall

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

4 bedrooms, two baths
so much for this downsizing
Tia changed her mind

she sure sold it though
downstairs will be studio
bass, drums, keys and all

next to that will be
my pool table. rack 'em up
kids may NOT return

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Denial is not
a river in Africa
zealousy a word?

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Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Liam sits at the door
staring at the brass door knob
scratching at his ears

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Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Today is her day
She must wear her birthday suit
Anticipation

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

I would be afraid
to receive what I deserve
the power of grace?

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

The wind has shifted.
the waves have formed up nicely
where's my boogie board?

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