Topic: Some musical comments please!

was bored today so decided to record me a new track

called "1967" check it out

http://www.myspace.com/sweatshopmutiny

not sure where to go with it at the moment so any comments/critisms please would be welcome! cool

Re: Some musical comments please!

Anyone??????????????

3 (edited by mbcl 2009-04-12 13:58:59)

Re: Some musical comments please!

I tried but it was not for me, I found it to repetative and whiny. Good luck though. smile


mr ed wrote:

Anyone??????????????

Re: Some musical comments please!

I liked it. Especially the slide work.

-Eric

"It makes it sound like the amp is about ready to explode, that's because it IS about ready to explode." -Joe

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Re: Some musical comments please!

Brack wrote:

Well, i will tell you honestly, it needs work! So i would call it, work in progress... but i have heard much worse.
I would like to hear, what you think of your own work.
How long have you been playing guitar ?
I also think, it's quite brave of you to put your music on here, you know...... Joe's site!  Very brave, you've got balls!!

~ Brack ~

know what you mean and agree with the winy comment. I never play or listen to anything in the style of tracks that I that I can be bothered to record.  Im normaly 100% blues all the time but as its just me on an 8 track recorder with no real drums and keys I find it hard to get the groove so to speak.

Ive being playing since i was 12 and im 16 now but I think i play better than the tracks on my myspace

thnx for the comments  smile

Re: Some musical comments please!

mr ed wrote:
Brack wrote:

Well, i will tell you honestly, it needs work! So i would call it, work in progress... but i have heard much worse.
I would like to hear, what you think of your own work.
How long have you been playing guitar ?
I also think, it's quite brave of you to put your music on here, you know...... Joe's site!  Very brave, you've got balls!!

~ Brack ~

know what you mean and agree with the winy comment. I never play or listen to anything in the style of tracks that I that I can be bothered to record.  Im normaly 100% blues all the time but as its just me on an 8 track recorder with no real drums and keys I find it hard to get the groove so to speak.

Ive being playing since i was 12 and im 16 now but I think i play better than the tracks on my myspace

thnx for the comments  smile

I think the fact that you have put this on here shows just how comfortable Joe makes you feel about yourself and your music and that is one of the loveliest things about Joe.
I have listened to your track and I think it's great, although for me the backing track doesn't suit the guitar very well.  A bit like wearing wellies with a sexy summer frock!  Maybe you dont wear frocks but in the 60s it was bare feet in the mud- although today's girls are more practical!  Also it's a bit too repetitive at the end, maybe add some psychedelic affects? Thanx for sharing and Good Luck smile

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