Re: Haiku! whats the rules?
Jane H. wrote:
i'm so damn lonely
i hate to go home alone
but what else is new
Good catch! 
--Vik 
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Amsterhammer wrote:
*makes T sign*
Timeout BJJ. I really need to know - whatswiththenewhaikustylewithnospaces?
itsnotreallynew
allofmyfirstonesthatway
but it's hard to read
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BluesMan wrote:
Libby wrote:bigjeffjones wrote:The truth shall be told
My family has evolved
to include forumMY big brother Jeff
nears his Bonametalhood
this very weekend
Libby
Ah yes, but Libby
He must have manhood and pride
a man's ceremonyI know, that's stupid!
Roy
more beans and cabbage
a man's manly snowblower
back up to driveway
let the melt begin
now the Escort has caught fire
methane on the wind
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Seagull you fly cross
the horizon into the
misty morning sun
Joe Bonamassa
unknown master of Haiku
just got to love him
Eva
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no weather reports
with happy news from my house
too painful for you
I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.
Bill S.
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stifling summer days
will quiet her happy ways
spring again she'll crave
I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.
Bill S.
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very fine lyrics
no disrespect to the man
that was Paul Rogers
eva wrote:
Seagull you fly cross
the horizon into the
misty morning sunJoe Bonamassa
unknown master of Haiku
just got to love himEva
never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young
never grow old, never ever die young
134 2008-03-23 07:48:02 (edited by eva 2008-03-23 07:50:18)
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I know you smartass
but fine lyrics anyway
he made them his own
Eva
gsj wrote:
very fine lyrics
no disrespect to the man
that was Paul Rogers
eva wrote:Seagull you fly cross
the horizon into the
misty morning sunJoe Bonamassa
unknown master of Haiku
just got to love himEva
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Sorry Geoff I know
you are not a smartass so
please give peace a chance
Eva
BluesMan wrote:
eva wrote:I know you smartass
but fine lyrics anyway
he made them his own
gsj wrote:very fine lyrics
no disrespect to the man
that was Paul Rogers
Let's stop this right now
this arguing over Joe
peace to soul he bringsRoy
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Haiku fever bites
Our lovely young German lass
Pass the bratwurst please
RIP Iron Man
Rock On and keep the Faith
Rock On and keep the Faith
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Amsterhammer wrote:
Haiku fever bites
Our lovely young German lass
Pass the bratwurst please
Bratwurst schmeckt lecker
Bring some to the Mimi tour
Wurst for everyone
Eva
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I'll be at my wurst
please keep my behavior mum
on the mimi tour
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he tiptoes closer
to one thousand posts left here
dear, giving friend jeff
I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
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no harm done Eva
Bluesman there's no argument
peace and love will reign
eva wrote:
Sorry Geoff I know
you are not a smartass so
please give peace a chanceEva
BluesMan wrote:eva wrote:I know you smartass
but fine lyrics anyway
he made them his own
Let's stop this right now
this arguing over Joe
peace to soul he bringsRoy
never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young
never grow old, never ever die young
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Haiku peace now rules
The warring parties shake hands
Misunderstanding
"Stars fall like tears from your eyes"
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what war, where, when how?
calm down this haiku thread guys
eva is my friend
we were just fooling
eva, tell these guys to sushhhhh!
for better or wurst
never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young
never grow old, never ever die young
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You are my friend too
so everybody please have
wurst and sauerkraut
That makes no sense!
Eva
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it makes sense to me
but then I've been to the pub
way too many beers
hic!
never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young
never grow old, never ever die young