Re: Haiku! whats the rules?
Oyeme Dios
el tipo esta loco
pero rapido
you left off don't just
okay now I understand
wet spot in the sand
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Been missing a while
Needed some down time head-wise
I'm back now, baby
RIP Iron Man
Rock On and keep the Faith
Rock On and keep the Faith
Re: Haiku! whats the rules?
Amsterhammer George! 
Been wondering about you
Noticed your absence
--Vik 
Re: Haiku! whats the rules?
Rocket wrote:
bigjeffjones wrote:Rocket wrote:Just go to a beach,
Lay there and stay there,
Now wash yourself downCorrections with love
seven syllables this line
and five for this one
I left off "just don't",
Surely I wrote it that way,
No way Jose you say?
Need more editing
Last line has 6 syllables
Should only be 5
--Vik
689 2011-08-24 09:57:52 (edited by Rocket 2011-08-24 09:59:13)
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TieDyeVikki wrote:
Rocket wrote:bigjeffjones wrote:Corrections with love
seven syllables this line
and five for this one
I left off "just don't",
Surely I wrote it that way,
No way Jose you say?Need more editing
Last line has 6 syllables
Should only be 5
--Vik
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Jose es solamente "one"
Speak fast like snake hiss
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“Now, this isn’t your ordinary party crowd, here. I mean, there are professionals in here.”
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TieDyeVikki wrote:
Amsterhammer George!
Been wondering about you
Noticed your absence--Vik
plumb conspicuous
in your absence and in mine
calm before the storm
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Wow, Jane on a roll
Waxing eloquently now
Haiku spurting forth
Rick
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It is difficult
BALANCEisHARDtoACHIEVE
roller coaster ride
LOVE roller coaster
fortune and glory after
love conquers your SELF
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they don't need a blade
FANGS and superhuman strength
payment to the night
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No there ain't no cure
twelve bar shuffle Texas style
the funky doc sings
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Asking a question
Often you wind up thinking
I wish I hadn't
Our brother Rocket
Feels a pain no parent should
Have to bear, Ever
Precious universe
Your keeper of love and faith
Needs your power now
RIP Iron Man
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Rock On and keep the Faith
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I just heard the news
And died a little inside
Prayers to my friend
"Rock ON & Keep the Faith"
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Rocket's anguished post
Tears streamed, a sob erupts
A parents nightmare
No words give solace
Terrible reality
Life can be so harsh
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Well I don't get it
But I'm just a simple man
The answer will come
Most of what I do
does not require sight or sound
The Great Spirit heals
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bagel and cream cheese.
Nova? Lox? perhaps a schmear...
no deli, no love
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Shoot me in the foot
Are you really serious?
You spozed to be deep?
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there ain't no justice
fair is an abstract concept
invented by man
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He's King of the Blues
Kosmik rain falls from beyond
Not one note to blame
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Blues From the Bottoms
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