379 (edited by RICjunkie 2008-07-04 07:42:31)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

American ryes
and single malt scotch last night
I need more coffee

Ardbeg and lobster
on the menu once again
I say "life is good"

A weekend in Maine
with friends now I know why they
are called Maineiacs

Major Tom to ground control...

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

bluesmaninlimbo
thebittertearsfelllikerain
theskyiscrying

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

bigjeffjones wrote:

bluesmaninlimbo
thebittertearsfelllikerain
theskyiscrying

InanswerLibby
youdidnotmissanything
everythingisCOOL

waxinglyrical
brokendownwarriorpoet
shareswithearththeBlues

Iliveloveandlaugh
painisjustawayoflife
I'llworkonmyvoice


shallIwaitfortruth
shecancomewithbloodysword
IknowsoI'mfree

aslavetomylusts?
asvariedastheymaybe?
arollofthedice

mojo this and that
I feel the voice of the one
"Carry on my son."

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             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

382 (edited by crossroads 2008-07-07 03:46:24)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

There was a young man from Japan
Who wrote verse
That never would scan
When they said,
But the thing
Does not go with a swing
He said,
Ah yes , but I like to get as many words as possible into the very last line

No Ordinary Joe

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

crossroads wrote:

There was a young man from Japan
Who wrote verse
That never would scan
When they said,
But the thing
Does not go with a swing
He said,
Ah yes , but I like to get as many words as possible into the very last line

Brother Bass Man!  that's not Haiku...doh...

Try again. wink

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Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Shred and Jdawg plan
Bluesman and Spider write too
And we all get spanked

lol  lol  lol

oh i'm so clever
and a bit of a wiseguy
but I'm no dumbell

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Twiddelin my thumbs
My jobs uninspiring
I can't even post

Rock On and Keep the Faith

Jack Loves Patty Loves Joe

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Oh, wherefore art thou
Our blessed haiku topic
Soother of the soul

Forum hooha here
And more hooha over there
Time heals all passions

Gentle play on words
Splendid mental diversion
You can bite me now

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

387

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ahhhhhh - the safety net
the comfort and rhythm of
five, seven and five

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

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Please your honor sir
I swear I did not mean it
Please your honor ma'am

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Blues From the Bottoms

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Sittin here alone
Checking out topic and thread
Where is everyone

Rock On and Keep the Faith

Jack Loves Patty Loves Joe

390 (edited by bigjeffjones 2008-07-19 15:41:55)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

I've been called to play
An airplane will take me there
MsTia said go...

Life is way too short
BackBeatBlues needs a bass man
Have gun will travel

EDITZ:  add url

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Hey bro', that airplane
Where's it gonna take you to
Just wondering like

That band is alright
They play Bonnie the goddess
Good enough for me

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

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To Boston I go
lives there my brother and band
Yes Deb sings Bonnie

I might lose money
but my brother won't lose gig
He's mister guitar

Their bass man Jeff too
Berkley grad and sings real good
but him called away.

Have bass will travel
the funky dr of love
with a load of blues

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Milestone approaches
Early pre-climax jitters
I need me some funk

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

394

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Amsterhammer wrote:

Milestone approaches
Early pre-climax jitters
I need me some funk

tick tock tick tock tick
BIG POST waiting in the wings.......
hammer it home George !!

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

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I gasp, breathlessly
As the Rubicon appears
Only a number

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

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And Funk you shall have!
Congratulations from me
Just took off my socks

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