Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

What's going on here
Sex and salsa kings abound
Oy vay already

big_smile

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Oy vey indeed, George
suffering from lack thereof
Too much info here.

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Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

It rained yesterday
you can hear my grass sighing
I hope more today.

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328 (edited by PaulB74 2008-05-20 07:17:40)

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Tried for so long to
resist the power of it
I can't anymore

from the outside in
looking at all the wizards
of the game Haiku.

The young pretenders
try to give away the crown
only one king here.

I'm bored at my desk
as you can probably tell
no change there then huh?

Am thankful for a good life,
others not so fortunate.
They have got my thoughts.

It's an ugly world
got a good family though
and a few good friends.

When the bad days come
I know they have got my back.
Better days will come.

smile Paul smile

"Music should strike fire from the heart of man, and bring tears from the eyes of woman."
                                                                                                   Ludwig Van Beethoven

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

PaulB74 wrote:

Tried for so long to
resist the power of it
I can't anymore

from the outside in
looking at all the wizards
of the game Haiku.

The young pretenders
try to give away the crown
only one king here.

I'm bored at my desk
as you can probably tell
no change there then huh?

Am thankful for a good life,
others not so fortunate.
They have got my thoughts.

It's an ugly world
got a good family though
and a few good friends.

When the bad days come
I know they have got my back.
Better days will come.

smile Paul smile

Desiderata
has some worthwhile things to read
"Strive to be happy"

I too am thankful
all my problems are HIGH CLASS
Lord of Karma reigns.

family is first
not the disfunctional ones
I cannot fix them. 

cool

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

There is alway hope
I would not rob a person
of desperation.

Pain will make one grow
For some there is no other way
How could I be wrong?

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Well done Paul and Roy
Haiku converts are always
Welcome surprises

Far too late for me
Get your **** into bed boy
Roll on tomorrow

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Night night hammer
sleep deprived you just might be
ere you board the bird

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Blues From the Bottoms

333

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Doheny was HOT
Know you're expecting a book
Will a haiku do?

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

No pressure Libby
A haiku will always do
Hope its a long one

Tho I prefer books
Or at least a short story
Takes what I can gets

Rock On and Keep the Faith

Jack Loves Patty Loves Joe

335

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

No rain here BJ
out came the old hose again
shocked old dear next door smile

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Naughty naughty man
She will never the same
it's all for the cause

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             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Libby wrote:

Doheny was HOT
Know you're expecting a book
Will a haiku do?

You're a funny one
you have been away too long
don't tease the forum

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             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

338

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

smile    Dear Sister Libby
       I´ll go to bed now because
       I´m really tired -

       But I sure hope to
       find a nice little (?) Libby -
       Review tomorrow                smile

               Eva

339

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

so sorry my friends
sure didn't mean to tease you
just stuff goin' on

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Libby wrote:

so sorry my friends
sure didn't mean to tease you
just stuff goin' on

Stuff? Stuff and nonsense
We need our write up, Libby
The forum awaits

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Iknowstuffhappens
IlivetheretooLibita
Forumwillbehere

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Blues From the Bottoms

342

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

months became just weeks
weeks became a string of days
days became long hours 

in mere MINUTES now
anticipation gives way
to reality

and it will be sweet
magical memorable
lovely and divine

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.