Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Stream of consciousness
libita pequena writes
and we all go ...whoa

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

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whoa indeed Jeff
straight from the heart there Libby
love without question

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young

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I apologize
my soul is transparent and
comfortable here

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

No apologies
Heart-felt haikus are the best
Thanks for yours Libby

Rock On and Keep the Faith

Jack Loves Patty Loves Joe

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it's like, we're looking
down on waynes basement only,
thats not waynes basement....

hey garth, that's a haiku!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=fCdNsm7gvu8

If wine and pills were hundred dollar bills
I might keep you satisfied

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Libby wrote:

I apologize
my soul is transparent and
comfortable here

omg that is seriously a hell of a haiku and i mean it.  way to go, f the rest.  that is why they exist!!!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=fCdNsm7gvu8

If wine and pills were hundred dollar bills
I might keep you satisfied

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Snap,Crackle and Pop
Three breakfast imps on your plate
Best with plenty milk.



OOOOH a Haiku jingle. Better ring Mr Kellog!


Colin

"Stars fall like tears from your eyes"

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no need to Libby
I really like your haiku
haiku all you like

Libby wrote:

I apologize
my soul is transparent and
comfortable here

never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young

Re: Haiku! whats the rules?

Libby wrote:

I apologize
my soul is transparent and
comfortable here

I have to agree
With others here that's really
One brilliant haiku

*bows deeply in admiration*

This elder thingy
A tale stranger than fiction
Enabled by Joe

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

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Life's filled with endings
and yet spring always returns
for someone somewhere

I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.

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Ah, Sunday morning
The board almost to myself
Roy and Libby sleep

big_smile

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

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Sorry George, now there´s
two of us spending time in
Bonamassaland

I hope you don´t mind,
well, at least I enjoy your
company my friend. smile

Eva

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You have mail, my dear
Happy for your company
Sunshine and Eva

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

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Good morning to you
yesterday was a big zoo
volleyball all stars

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

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Volleyball all stars?
Come on my man, spill the beans
Six foot six ladies?

RIP Iron Man

Rock On and keep the Faith

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no they was chirruns
15 and under females
silver group first place

loose in orlando
me, two women and three girls
four courts at one time

then to Italian
supper and drinks and desert
teen girls on sugar

dad had a headache
only rooster in hen house
driving for two hours

Rock On & Keep the FAITH
             It is
Blues From the Bottoms

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What a great weekend
Universal Studio
with my best girlfriend

Roller Coaster Ride
at Islands of Adventure
We had so much fun

Then dinner with friends
Great Lobster Ravioli
at Spice Restaurant

So it's back to work
But it's only for three days
Then off on Thursday

Over to Cocoa
To see Joe Bonamassa
I just cannot wait

Next day Jacksonville
To see Joe Bonamassa
What a great weekend!!!

Susan smile

"Listen to the melody cause my love is in there hiding"

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i put on sloe gin
listened to tracks five and eight
now i feel better

Tell me about the car i saw parked outside your door ? Tell me what you left me waiting two or three hours for ? Tell me why when the phone rings, baby, your up and across the floor ? Please dont keep me wondering no more.....