Topic: Haiku! whats the rules?
Cry, grumble and moan
I get older every day
Snap, crackle and pop
Rock On & Keep the FAITH
It is
Blues From the Bottoms
It is
Blues From the Bottoms
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You got it! The standard form is 5 - 7 - 5
Chandler, Gibson, Strat
hand moves faster than lightening
the slide screams the blues
~Rhonda
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One of my favorites:
Worker bees can leave
Even drones can fly away
The queen is their slave
Well, the night I was born
Lord I swear the moon turned a fire red
Lord I swear the moon turned a fire red
Re: Haiku! whats the rules?
Joe Bonamassa
plays the blues like no one else
he's a guitar god
--Vik 
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Sorry, this thread is lost on me - can anyone help?
Geoff
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Here you go Geoff......
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
P. S. I'm so glad Sue joined us officially!!!!
Libby
I know that Joe could play one of those kid's guitars with the plastic strings and make it sound good-
Bill S.
Bill S.
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Pass him on the right
He is clogging up the left
Drunken redneck fool
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I'll leave you with it then
Geoff
9 2008-03-06 09:09:21 (edited by bigjeffjones 2008-03-06 09:14:35)
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Why don't you tell your
dreams to me? Fantasy will
set you free. Don't stop.
Rock On & Keep the FAITH
It is
Blues From the Bottoms
It is
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Not always this good
Love and music rock the boat
Time is on my side
Rock On & Keep the FAITH
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Blues From the Bottoms
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bigjeffjones wrote:
Why don't you tell your
dreams to me? Fantasy will
set you free. Don't stop.
Steppenwolf is great
also a novel by Hess
got their name from him
Well, the night I was born
Lord I swear the moon turned a fire red
Lord I swear the moon turned a fire red
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Jane H. wrote:
Bonabuddy Stu
the wisest words come from you
gift is this haiku
Wisest I am not
I simply share what I feel
You embarrass me 
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This haiku-ing stuff
Not really a piece of cake
No, webcor, webcor
RIP Iron Man
Rock On and keep the Faith
Rock On and keep the Faith
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Geoff wrote:
Sorry, this thread is lost on me - can anyone help?
Geoff
Sorry we can’t help
Is it because you don’t like
guitars and poems?
“A friend is someone that will help you move............a TRUE friend will help you move the bodies." -- anon
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Amsterhammer wrote:
This haiku-ing stuff
Not really a piece of cake
No, webcor, webcor
Blinding turn of phrase
Some say for the Yank he is
Please go to work now
Rock On & Keep the FAITH
It is
Blues From the Bottoms
It is
Blues From the Bottoms
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bigjeffjones wrote:
Amsterhammer wrote:This haiku-ing stuff
Not really a piece of cake
No, webcor, webcorBlinding turn of phrase
Some say for the Yank he is
Please go to work now
A master's presence
Humbling for the Yank it is
Quietly he goes
RIP Iron Man
Rock On and keep the Faith
Rock On and keep the Faith
17 2008-03-06 16:04:54 (edited by gsj 2008-03-06 16:06:00)
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A masters presence
It is the guitar's master
The presence of Joe
Amsterhammer wrote:
bigjeffjones wrote:Amsterhammer wrote:This haiku-ing stuff
Not really a piece of cake
No, webcor, webcorBlinding turn of phrase
Some say for the Yank he is
Please go to work nowA master's presence
Humbling for the Yank it is
Quietly he goes
never give up, never slow down
never grow old, never ever die young
never grow old, never ever die young
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gsj wrote:
A masters presence
It is the guitar's master
The presence of Joe
Geoff needs a leg-up
Bonametal beckons now
Bird migration day
RIP Iron Man
Rock On and keep the Faith
Rock On and keep the Faith